Wednesday, 10 September 2014

WILF
I will begin by describing what the character body felt like 
I will describe what they were thinking 
I will leave the audience hanging

his legs were shaking, he sat silent on the left corner of his bed, his arms were quivering like a cold dog in the snow, he was sweating just thinking about what trouble he will get into...

Can you infer what emotion I writ about my sentences?

6 comments:

  1. keep up the grate work lil sis

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    1. Thank you Joydah for coming to our chrome book meeting

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  2. Yes Milly you are doing really well. Its great your big sis came along tonight... she is awesome

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  3. Hi Milly! I love your work! Very colourful. You are so talented! The only thing that I would recommend is that you work on your spelling. Over all AWESOME!:)

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    1. thank's hope for that lovely comment

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